2007年中考英語(yǔ)作文面面觀--提示作文

2007年中考英語(yǔ)作文面面觀--提示作文

什么是提示性作文？

　　提示性作文：就是給出一個(gè)標(biāo)題或無(wú)標(biāo)題，給出具體的內(nèi)容，規(guī)定一定的字?jǐn)?shù)，讓考生寫(xiě)出作文。由于這類(lèi)作文已經(jīng)規(guī)定了文章的中心思想和主要內(nèi)容，因此考生可以不再列出提綱，只要把注意力集中在如何正確、完整地用英文詞句表達(dá)出中心思想和內(nèi)容就可以了。
寫(xiě)好提示性作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)

1、仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。對(duì)所給信息反復(fù)閱讀，弄清這個(gè)題目要表達(dá)什么，然后對(duì)所給信息進(jìn)行整理、組織，按照自己的寫(xiě)作思路使之條理化。

2、確保語(yǔ)言精煉。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，考生應(yīng)時(shí)刻提醒自己按照已給出的信息點(diǎn)去寫(xiě)，不必有太多的發(fā)揮。但也不必按照信息點(diǎn)去逐句翻譯。用自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)、句型去體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)。掌握好文章的長(zhǎng)度，不要字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多或過(guò)少。

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例題分析

一、漢語(yǔ)提示

　　根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須用上。字?jǐn)?shù)60～70左右。

　　1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。
　　2、在路上我遇到了一個(gè)外國(guó)人。
　　3、他向我詢問(wèn)去溫泉飯店（the　Hot　Spring　Hotel）的路。
　　4、我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)彎處向左拐就能看見(jiàn)飯店。
　　5、他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。

　　提示詞語(yǔ)：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that（分析）

　　寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：根據(jù)提示我們了解到這是一篇記敘文，所以考生應(yīng)馬上想到時(shí)間（yesterday evening），地點(diǎn)（on the road），人物（I, my mother and a foreigner），事件（how　to show the way）。其次觀察信息點(diǎn)，我們確定這篇文章應(yīng)用過(guò)去式來(lái)表達(dá)。然后，確定這個(gè)事件應(yīng)用第一人稱來(lái)敘述。最后，按照信息點(diǎn)合理組織文章，別忘用上提示詞語(yǔ)。

　?。ɡ模?br>Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner.
He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him.

二、英語(yǔ)提示

　　你收到一封咨詢信，請(qǐng)你以旅行社工作人員的身份完成任務(wù)。
Dear Ace Travel,
I'm Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don't mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots?
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Li Ming

　　請(qǐng)你根據(jù)來(lái)信，從下列所給的地方中選擇一個(gè)或兩個(gè)符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議。（80字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai

　　寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：這篇作文結(jié)合了提示性作文和應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作要求。首先，我們要讀懂英語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，也就是那封咨詢信的內(nèi)容。其次，我們要知道書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作方法。針對(duì)本道題，還要注意，這封信是以旅行社工作人員的身份來(lái)寫(xiě)的。最后，還要注意咨詢信后的要求-從下列所給的地方中選擇一個(gè)或兩個(gè)符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議及字?jǐn)?shù)限制。

(第一范文網(wǎng) www.diyifanwen.com整理)

　　下面，我們來(lái)看看范文是怎么寫(xiě)的。

One Possible version:

Dear Li Ming,
I'm Gina. It's my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. What's more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.

Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （It's also a wonderful place for shopping. ）And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. （And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ）
That's just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.
Yours,
Gina

　　對(duì)于，提示作文的寫(xiě)法大家都會(huì)了嗎？不管什么作文的寫(xiě)作，都要要求我們對(duì)英語(yǔ)的詞匯、短語(yǔ)以及常用的表達(dá)方法有一定的積累。所以，在學(xué)習(xí)寫(xiě)作的同時(shí)，不要放松對(duì)以上幾個(gè)方面的復(fù)習(xí)。